a real phillip k. dick move ([info]asterios) wrote,
@ 2008-07-17 01:31:00
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Tom Tomorrow actually writes something funny
Liberal cartoonist Tom Tomorrow is pretty unfunny. To prove this, I went to his archive and clicked on a random link to a cartoon, assuming the result would be unfunny:



And I Was Right! All Tomorrow does is complain about conservative tactics in a really one dimensional way, and it's boring.

However, this piece he wrote on the Huffington Post about the Obama/New Yorker cover is pretty fantastic:

SATIRE BY THE BOOK, by Tom Tomorrow

"The internets are full of declarative statements about satire these days, the most common of which being that "satire does not work unless it portrays its intended target."

So let's consider this image:



Clearly this cartoon doesn't work at all, because there is no way for the reader to understand that its intended target was not Saddam Hussein and Osama bin Laden themselves. So let's see what we can do to clarify things:



That makes the intention of the cartoon clearer -- but there's still room for improvement.



There! That's much better! But maybe, just to be safe, we should take it one step further:



Okay then! With no room for misinterpretation whatsoever -- that's comedy gold!

Remember: satire does not work unless it literally portrays the intended target!"



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[info]beatcamel
2008-07-17 03:19 pm UTC (link)
that first comic reminds me of that Simpsons moment, I think it's the one where they have the news show and Bart opens the paper and reads "Today The Supreme Court decided that-UHHHHHHH" then he flips to the comic section and he starts reading Archie and he likes "Hey Jughead, did you hear that today the supreme court decided-UHHHHHH" and he groans again.

That first strip reminded me of that, I got like three panels in and let out a huge groan of pain and boredom.

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[info]annie_linux
2008-07-18 12:55 am UTC (link)
Liberal cartoonist Tom Tomorrow is pretty unfunny.

I guess this is a matter of opinion because some of us really like his comics.

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[info]asterios
2008-07-18 10:50 am UTC (link)
I think he'd be a lot funnier if Ted Rall & Tom The Dancing Bug weren't doing what he does in a clearer voice with better art.

Here's last week's tom the dancing bug (i picked his most recent political comic for fairness).





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[info]annie_linux
2008-07-21 03:27 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, okay, this comic is definitely better...and funnier! Thanks for the tip Asterios. :-)

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